I always feel like in life no matte how bad you think that it is it can always get worse. Some people say that their lives are horrible or that their having the worst day of their lives. They say this because their hamburger was made wrong or they made a bad grade on a test. When all the while their are people in the world that can't afford to buy food and that haven't even heard the word school. So remember when you have a problem it can always get worse.
How does this describe or define who you are? It doesn't fit the requirements of the assignment.
ReplyDeleteThat's much better.
ReplyDeleteYou only have four posts, however, and you have not cited any of your pictures. Go back and fix that and this grade will raise. If not, if will lower.
Grade: C+
Citations still not given.
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